Year 9 pupils wrote a short paragraph about you.
I changed the grammar and marked the grammatical mistakes but I didn't change the spelling.
Patrick, could you please answer and give information about yourself ?
We all hope you're doing well and you're happy to go back to University.
THANK YOU AGAIN for your work in France, it's been a pleasure to have you here ! Take care !
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His name is Patrick.
He was born on March 1998.
He is 20 years old.
He has one cat.
He has one brother.
His father's name is Arran and his mother's name is Vanessa.
His favorite color is orange.
He lives in Birmingam.
He has not children.
He likes playing football.
Orléane
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- His name is Patrick.
-He lives
in Bayananghan
-He was born
on March 9 th,1998
-He is twelve
years old
-Her mother’s
name is Vanessa
-Her father’s
name is Harry
-Patrick has
one cat
-He has one
brother
-He likes
football and reading, Quentin
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His name is Patrick. He lives
in Birmingham. His wase born on
9th of March 1998. He is 20 years
old. His parents are
Vanesa and Aran . He has one cat
. He has one brother. He likes
football,spending
time with his friend. Théo
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Patrick
His
name is Patrick
He lives
in Birgmigam
His
birthday is on the 9 march
He
is 20years old
His
parents are Vanessa and Arone
He
has 1 cat
He
has 1 brother
His
favorite hobbie is football
He
has not childreen
His
favorite color is orange
Théophile
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His
name is Patrick.He is from in
England Birningham.The birthday
of Patrick is the nine march 1998. He loves
playing football.He has
one brother and his brother's
name is Louis. He loves dogs but
he has a cat. Tristan
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His
name is
patrick, patrick
has
one cat and he
has
one brother.
Patrick likes
football and he is 18 years old. Théo.…...............................................................................................................................................................
His name is
Patrick.
He lives
in England.
His
birthday is on the nine de March.
He is
twenty years old.
These parents are Vanessa
and Harry.
He has
one cat.
He has
one brother.
He likes
playing football. Killian
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His
name is Patrik.He has 20 years old and his birthday is on 9 Mach
1998.
He lives in England.He has a cat ; the name for his mother is vanessa.
He
has no wife at the moment. Laura
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Hello
his name is Patrick
he lives un Birminghamhis date of birth is the 11 march 1998
he is 18 years old
He name of parents is Vanessa and Harry and grands parents is Rachid ans Eval
he likes the football, reading and spending time with his friends
he has one brother and one cat
Arthur
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Patrick
is an English student ,he is twenty years old .
He comes from BIRMINGHAM.
Patrick likes to be with his friends
He has a brother and a cat.
Good bye !
LUCY
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His name is PatrickHe lives in London
His birth is 9 March
He is 20 years old
His parent name is :Arold
He likes football Quentin
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The
assistant is Patrick, he is 25, he has a brother. Patrick comes from
Bernern but lives in Bernmthe. He has a dog but also a cat, he likes
football, viking and also Speat likinf here bye bye Maelys
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His name is Patrick. He lives in Birmingham. He was born on March
19, 1998. He is 20 years old. He is from Birmingham. His parents are
Vanessa and Harry. He has one cat and one half-brother. He likes to
play football and read. Julie
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Patrick:
-he is patrick.
-he lives in england
-he is 20 years and he is was born the 9 of march 1998
-he has 1 cat and 1 brother
-he loves football
-his parents are arron and ….
Christophe
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His
name is Patrick,he is 20 (twenty) year
old.Patrick lives Buckingham and he is a student.Patrick has
a pet and a half brother. Alwena
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His name is Patrick , Patrick is a boy , he lives in Birmingham ,
his date of birth is in March , Patrick is 20 years old , he loves a
cat but he prefers a dog , he has
a cat , his nationality is England , Patrick plays
football , he has 1 brother , his brother is 12 years old.
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Patrik is twenty years old he likes to take(bring) out with his friend he lives in England and he was our assitant guillaume
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PATRICK
Patrick Edwards is 20 years old on march 9,1999. He is from United Kingdom and lives in birminghan. The name of his parents are Vanessa and Harry , he has one brothers . His hobby is freestyle football. Alexis
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His name is patrick.He lives in Beningam. The date of birth of Patrick is in March 1998. He is 20 years old. His Mum is Vanessa and his Dad is Arran. He has 1 half-brother.He likes Football and playing with his friends. Jade
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Patrick lives in England and he comes from Barmangher. He was born on 9 Mars 1999 and Patrick is 20 years old. The name of his parents are Cold and Haren . He has one cat and one brother. Patrick likes playing football. He likes bananas . His friend 's name is Jack and for the moment he doesn't have a lover . Léopoldine
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Your assistant
Your
assistant is a boy. His name is Patrick. He lives in England in
Birmingham. He was born on March the twentieth, nineteen ninety
eight. His mother's name is Vanessa and his father's name is Arrin.
He has one cat. He has two half brothers and sisters and
one brother. He likes playing football. He likes also reading. Louise
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His
name is patrick. He lives in Birmingham in England.He was born on
19th March 1999.He is twenty years old.The name of his parents
is Vanessa and Harry.He has one brother and one cat.He likes playing
football and he likes reading too. Raphaël
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He is Patrick. Patrick is a boy. He lives in
Burningam. Patrick's birthday is on 9
march 1998. He is 20 years old. The name for his
parents is Vanessa and Arone. He has got 1 cat and he has got 1
brother. Patrick likes playing football,and reading. His
favorite colour is orange and his favorite sport is football. And
Patrick has no children. Lucie…...............................................................................................................................................
His name is Patrick. He comes from Birmingham. He is twenty Years Old and he is a student. In his family there are two children. Him and his brother. He has one pet : he has a cat. Alexia
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The assistant’s name is Patrick. He is 20 and therefore born in 1998. He lives in Birmingham and comes from there too. He likes football, reading and spending time with his friends. He has a cat and a half brother but no dogs, sisters or chameleons. Maya
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PATRICK
Patrick lives in
Birmingham and he is twelve years old. He has one half-brother and
one cat. Patrick loves to be with his friends and to play football.
His parents are Vanessa and Harry. Matéo
B.
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His name is Patrick. He lives
in Birmingham. He was born on 19 March
1999. He is 19 years oldHe was born in Birmingham. He likes football. Thomas
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Hello,
The name of the assitant is Patrick and he is twenty years old. Patrick comes from in Birmingham and he lives in this city, in England. Birmingham is the second largest city in England after the capital London. He is an English student. Patrick has one cat and he has one brother. He is tall with a blue or green eyes. His hair is brown. Ludivine.
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His name is Patrick and he likes football.He was born on 9th March, 1998, he is twenty years old.
His parent's names are Vanessa and Harry. He has got one half brother and a cat. He is from and lives in England and he studies french and spanish. Zéna
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His
name is Patrick and he is twenty years old. He lives in Birmingham.
Patrick was born the 9th March 1998.His
parents name are:Vanessa and Harry. He has one cat and he has one
half brother.
He
likes playing football,reading and
spenning time with his friends. Lénaïg
He is Patrick. He lives in Bermingham in England. He has 1 cat and 1 half brother. He is 20 years old. He comes from Berminghham. He likes doing football, reading, spending time with friends. Manon
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Patrick. His name is Patrick and he is twenty years old. He lives in (Birmingham) and he (comes from Birmingham). Patrick plays football and he reads. He has 1 cat and 1 brother. Juliette.
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Patrick is
the boy and his
nationality is
english,he
is an
adult. Mathis D
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Patrik
is a boy he lives in Birmingham in England. Patrik is
20 years old.
He has a half brother. Patrik likes football, reading and seeing his friends. Patrik has a cat. Candys.
…..............................................................................................................................................He has a half brother. Patrik likes football, reading and seeing his friends. Patrik has a cat. Candys.
His
Name Is Patrick. Patrick Is 20 years old. He has
à cat. He has a brother and He
likes playing football. Théo
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his
name is Patrik. He comes from Beuhidan.
He likes playing football. He has got
two brothers. He has one cat. He is 20
ear old. He likes hanging out with his
friends downtown. Louise
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His
name is Patrick. He
is twenty years old. He
lives in England with Biemajh. He
comes from England of Biemajh. He
likes to spend time with my friend
and play football. He
has a brother .
Emilien
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His
name is Patrique, he is twenty years old and he lives
in Bermingum and comes from England. He
has one cat and he has one brother. Sarah
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His
name is Patrick. Patrick is a boy. He lives in Birmingam. His date of
birth is in March. He is 20 years old.
He has one cat, and he loves it. His dad is Harry. Patrick plays
football. He has one brother. Eloïse
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He
lives in Britain, in Birmingham. He is a boy. Patrick's birthday
is on the 9th
March. He is 20 years old. He has a 1
cat. The parent's names of Patrick are : Vanessa and Aron. Patrick
loves football, orange and hip-hop music
Axel
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Patrick
was born on March 11th,
1998. He is 18 years old and lives
in Buckingan. His parents are called vanessa and harry, and his
grandparents are called Rachild and Eval. He has 1 brother and 1 half
brother. He has 1 cat. He likes the reading and likes spending time
with his friends. Clara L.
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His
name is Patrick. His birthday is 1999,
March 29. He is 19. He has
got a brother. Arzhel
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Patrick
is 29 years old, his date of birth is
March 1988. He lives in Berkingam and he
is from Berkingam. He likes football,
reading and Spanich. Patrick has 1
brother. He doesn't have a girlfriend.
Côme
Hi everyone! It was lovely to read your write-ups; I was very impressed by how good your English is. Thank you all for being so kind to me during my stay, I hope you all enjoy the rest of your school year!
RépondreSupprimerPatrick
Thank you Patrick ! Best of luck with the upcoming academic year ! We wish you all the best.
RépondreSupprimerIn French : Patrick a 20 ans, ses parents s'appellent Vanessa et Aaron, il a un demi-frère et un chat. Il habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre, il est Anglais. Il aime le football freestyle, il a été sacré en 2015 le 2ème meilleur freestyler de toute l'Angleterre. Il aime lire et sortir avec ses amis. Bravo à tous ceux qui ont réussi !